Unfailing (Poem by Mark Swift)

By a wall that never falls,
Near the bird that never sings.
Life is pain, and that is that,
But forever more, I’ll stay the same.
Running like a cheetah,
Writing like a scholar;
Climbing like a monkey,
Talking like a parrot;
My joy will never end.

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  1. Wow, like your other poems, it starts out negative, but ends on a positive note. I love that style! It's very original and is well, poetic.

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  2. I love the connection to animals in this, well done! :)

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    1. ?
      What do you mean you remember this? :/

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    2. Oh, yeah! :D I had posted it here immediately after sharing it with you guys

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  4. Unfailing
    Not me, I'm failing to continue these comments, quite possibly.

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