Climbing Tree (Poem by Mark Swift)

Going up the
Climbing Tree;
Easy to climb the
Climbing Tree;
Up and up the
Climbing Tree;
But there's a limit to the
Climbing Tree;
Now it's time to descend the
Climbing Tree;
But I'll be back, my
Climbing Tree

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  1. Aw! I love this one. Climbing trees are the best. From my own experience, that's a spot on. Wonder what gave you the inspiration. (;

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    1. Yes, I love Climbing Trees :D I'm still scared of heights, though lol
      Yeah, I wonder...lol

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  2. Aww! This is really cute, took me back to me sitting up in this oak tree or pepper tree for hours when I was younger, and still sometimes do. This is great, I love the repetition of "climbing tree!" Great job!

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    1. ...well, I wasn't aiming for cute, but okay lol

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    2. Well, it's not cute, but it kind of is, just from my perspective just because it brings back sweet and cute childhood memories, so cute from my perspective but I can see it's not written from that perspective, of being cute. :P

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  3. This reminds me of Chicka Chicka Boom Boom, (look it up), but then also made me imagine the tree Piglet from Whinne the Pooh lived in, but both are totally unrelated to the meaning of this poem lol.

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    1. Oh no, not that...-groans- I can only faintly remember it, but I remember hating it with my life lol

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