Sometimes I looked out at the endless sea,
Wondering what was left here for me.
The tears began to sting my eyes,
As if I was one who at sad sights cries.
But then I got up as my eyes fell upon a lone fox,
At that moment, the whole world seemed to fit in a box.
Funny how even the simplest of creatures,
Can prove to be the most relaxing of features.
Author's Note: This poem was inspired by the writing prompt on ShaePoems' blog.
Wondering what was left here for me.
The tears began to sting my eyes,
As if I was one who at sad sights cries.
But then I got up as my eyes fell upon a lone fox,
At that moment, the whole world seemed to fit in a box.
Funny how even the simplest of creatures,
Can prove to be the most relaxing of features.
Author's Note: This poem was inspired by the writing prompt on ShaePoems' blog.
I like this one! It's style is very different than what you normally do, and it's a fun change of pace.
ReplyDeleteDo you normally write your poems in couplet form?
The style definitely is different
DeleteI'm not sure what that means, but I think "No" is a safe answer. Nothing about this poem is normal for me, except that it begins with a rather depressed mindset and ends on a cheerful note
Lol. Except for it being bipolar. You are like two completely different and contradictory people mushed into one
DeleteAnd the bipolar part could be described as going from depressing to cheerful xD
Deletetrue. :P
DeleteIn any case, I do feel this is one of my better non-funny poems. And I'm glad to have been able to give my favorite creatures a place on this blog :D
Deletelol. That's what is different! it's not a joke!
DeleteYou should be the mirror fox!
Exactly :D
DeleteNah, I'm sticking to my "Mirror Ant / Mere Ant" pun lol
For those who don't know, you should have a post explaining what is the deal with the ant. XD
DeleteThey can ask in the Q/A if they want xD
DeleteTrue
DeleteThis was epic!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
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