The flowers blowing in the breeze
The light rain falling on a winter day
The things I don’t see
Everywhere and every place
The rocky outcrop with the roaring waves
The lazy naps and summer days
The cold air that chills to the bone
The starry nights and mysteries you unfold
You fleshed out this wonder
That we call light
You allow us to endeavor
This wonderful thing named life
The stars shine together in harmony
Made by a greater hand so simply
The rest You took, we shall too
All of creation follows You
The whispers in the breeze
The snow laden trees
The fields painted with light at dawn
The first steps of a newborn fawn
The love only You can provide
The happiness You’ve given my life
You will do everything over and over again
You have forgiven every single sin
And I will always follow your footsteps
Even when I’m barely standing
I will keep walking
Because I know You’re right next to me
You will always remain, you will always be
My everything
The light rain falling on a winter day
The things I don’t see
Everywhere and every place
The rocky outcrop with the roaring waves
The lazy naps and summer days
The cold air that chills to the bone
The starry nights and mysteries you unfold
You fleshed out this wonder
That we call light
You allow us to endeavor
This wonderful thing named life
The stars shine together in harmony
Made by a greater hand so simply
The rest You took, we shall too
All of creation follows You
The whispers in the breeze
The snow laden trees
The fields painted with light at dawn
The first steps of a newborn fawn
The love only You can provide
The happiness You’ve given my life
You will do everything over and over again
You have forgiven every single sin
And I will always follow your footsteps
Even when I’m barely standing
I will keep walking
Because I know You’re right next to me
You will always remain, you will always be
My everything
This is religious, isn't it.
ReplyDeleteI believe it is religious, actually. Why?
DeleteJust asking. Gave me the vibes. Al in all, its pretty good. I didn't realize how bluntish that sounded till now hhhhhh
DeleteLol No worries, I'm pretty blunt whenever I want to be subtle, ironically, so I don't blame you :P
DeleteBut yeah, it is pretty good. Gabby has a unique style of poetry, but it's super cool!
Yes this is religious, a lot of the stuff I write is. :) And thank you both! It is unique, I don't follow poetry guidelines often or anything like that, if it rhymes I call it poetry! :D
DeleteI love this SO much! The peaceful, blissful contentedness of the entire scene is amazing! How you tied it to God was beautiful and natural. Keep on writing! This is great!!! :D
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much Kyra!! I'm really happy you liked it, that really means a lot to me!! :D
DeleteAww, Gabby, this is so pretty. I love your detail and the meaning behind the poem. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Shaly, that means a lot!
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