You Made Candy Less Sweet (Poem by Marysa Writes)

During a time of sugar-coated promises
and sweet-toothed grins,
you were a bag of sour gumdrops.
You produced puckered lips
and friendly laughs
until the burns kicked in at your bite.
You gave away pieces of you
until all that remained
were bloody tongues and chaffed lips.
During this time of sugar-coated promises
and sweet-toothed grins,
you were a bag of sour gumdrops,
good only in moderation.

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  1. Hi, Marysa. :) This is really pretty.

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  2. Candy = Food
    Food = Amazing
    Amazing = This Poem
    This Poem = Candy
    That actually seems remotely accurate! :D

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  3. I love candy. I love this. I love the moral. This is poetic perfection!

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