During a time of sugar-coated promises
and sweet-toothed grins,
you were a bag of sour gumdrops.
You produced puckered lips
and friendly laughs
until the burns kicked in at your bite.
You gave away pieces of you
until all that remained
were bloody tongues and chaffed lips.
During this time of sugar-coated promises
and sweet-toothed grins,
you were a bag of sour gumdrops,
good only in moderation.
I absolutely <3 this piece.
ReplyDeleteHi, Marysa. :) This is really pretty.
ReplyDeleteCandy = Food
ReplyDeleteFood = Amazing
Amazing = This Poem
This Poem = Candy
That actually seems remotely accurate! :D
Thanks everyone
ReplyDeleteI love candy. I love this. I love the moral. This is poetic perfection!
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